who can help me edit this chapter?(i'm 16)?
Feb 12, 9179 by Tarek R | Posted in Books & Authors
1-Magial equations
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Sleepy | Feb 12, 1407
Its advantage so far.
There are some grammatical errors though. There should be a space between each comma and the following word. Another thing you should change is that all speech should start with a property letter.
MyWorldisBlack | Feb 12, 9795
The grammar is beautiful bad... I couldn't get past the first paragraph. Sorry
Skeletor | Feb 12, 9888
Tarek,
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pj m | Feb 12, 595
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Sleepy | Feb 12, 1407
for all young adults out there??boys and girls....?
Feb 12, 8542 by Tarek R | Posted in Books & Authors
1-Magial equations
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Talking down to your readers in the first sentence is a major
10-15 Bride (formerly KK) | Feb 12, 9064
i got this in an e- mail today.......?
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